Wish I would have seen this before I set up my FTP site. What wold make your presetation far better would be a project preview prior to this Video.

Your video covers the WHS 2011 set up but for most Home Servers are going to struggle without understanding:

What are the server side requirments:
– Setting up User Access in WHS
– Adding the FTP Roll in IIS
– Adding IIS Users

What to avoid!
– FTP isolation etc

Setting up your router
– Setting up NAT in the Router (UPNP notwithstanding)
– Opening port 21 (covered)

Setting up a Domain name DyDNS